Do not worry about spoilers in a query letter. “But wait, I saw an agent say in an interview that they don’t want spoilers in a query letter! It’s right there on their website!” Do not believe them. I repeat: Do not worry about spoilers in a query letter. “But I want them to be […]
Query Letters
New video on how to write a query letter!
I’ve been hard at work on some new ways to deliver you the information you need to achieve your writing goals. First up: a sixteen minute video on how to write a query letter! I share my top tips on writing a killer plot description, the personalization and nuts and bolts you need to include, […]
How (and why) to personalize a query letter
Authors often gnash their teeth at the nearly-universal advice that you should personalize your query letters. It’s time consuming to research agents individually, people don’t know what to say, and there’s something about it that just rubs people the wrong way. It pays to personalize. Just do it. In this post I’ll explain why and […]
The “voice of god” from movie trailers is killing your query letter
Last week I went to the movies for the first time since the pandemic started, and I encountered a curiosity I’d largely forgotten existed: movie trailers. And while I was coaching a writer on how to improve their query letter, I had an epiphany: lots of authors are writing their query letters like the “voice […]
How to format a query letter
SUBJECT LINE: Query – [Something that makes sense like your book title] Dear Blog Readers, This is how you format an e-mailed query letter. Note that I did not begin with the recipient’s address or my address or the date, as that is not customary for an e-mail. I also am not indenting because indenting […]
One of the fastest paths to rejection: implying you don’t read much
I saw a mini-blowup on Twitter last week that arose because a publishing professional had the temerity to suggest that anyone seeking publication should be very well read. Apparently this is still a controversial opinion in some circles! Look. If you don’t read books, no one is going to take away your laptop and lock […]
