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How to respond to a partial manuscript request

July 5, 2007 by Nathan Bransford 31 Comments

Partial Manuscript Request

If you receive a partial manuscript request from a literary agent (or a full), congrats! You’ve beaten the odds and it’s justifiable to celebrate. Go buy yourself that big cigar.

However, you’d be surprised at how many e-mailed partials agents get that just say “Here it is” and attach 30 pages with no other info. Which means the agent has to spend 10 minutes trying to figure out what it is and then search through their e-mail files and… well, most agents like to be efficient.

So. If you receive a request for your manuscript, follow these steps.

UPDATED 5/29/19

Include your original query and the agent’s partial request

Most importantly: when you e-mail your include your original query letter and any conversation you’ve had with the agent at the bottom of the e-mail. Just reply to the original thread.

This one was so important to me when I was a literary agent. When someone sent me a whole new email, when I sat down to read a partial a week to two weeks later I had to go hunting through my files to find the original e-mail to refresh my memory, it took forever, and made me Mr. Cranky McCrankyagent.

So please: include the query. Use good email etiquette. Please.

Take the opportunity to personalize the note

Sending the partial is a great opportunity to include another very short personalized note. No pressure or anything, but it’s another opportunity to present yourself as a very cool, awesome writer who so totally isn’t stressing about whether or not the agent will ask for a full manuscript.

Respect the agent’s request

When I was an agent, I usually asked for the first 30 pages, even though I knew it was somewhat irrational to ask for partials. Couldn’t I just request the whole thing and read as much as I wanted?

The key thing for me is that it established expectations with the author about how much I was really planning to read.

It was also one of my many self-coded tip-offs for when authors would contact me again. If an author came back to me and I’d previously requested the full manuscript, I’d want to look at the new manuscript almost 100% of the time. If I had rejected a partial, I’d consider it a bit more like a regular query. It was a way of signaling my level of interest to my future self so I could be more efficient.

So if an agent asks for a partial: send the amount they ask for. If a chapter ends at Page 32 I’m not going to kill you if you include 32 pages. Whatever makes for a natural break.

Start at the beginning

Send the first 30 pages (or 20 or 50), not just any ole 30 pages. If your book has a prologue, send the prologue. Show the agent where you think the novel begins.

Check your formatting

Make sure your manuscript is formatted correctly.

Keep the agent posted on any new developments

Keep the agent apprised if you receive another offer of representation (they don’t need to know about additional manuscript requests). Here’s a post on how to handle an agent offering you representation.

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Art: Alfred Stevens – The Letter

Filed Under: Literary Agents Tagged With: contests, How to Find a Literary Agent, How to Write a Query Letter

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  1. Luc2 says

    July 5, 2007 at 6:23 pm

    Thank you, Nathan. Useful as always.

    I finally feel that query letters will not kill me, only cause severe headaches.

    If you have time in the near future (or are in search for another topic), could you give some pointers on summaries and synopses?

    Reply
  2. Heidi the Hick says

    July 5, 2007 at 8:07 pm

    You know, I think this is the first time I’ve read specifics on how to send a partial.

    Luckily for me I have yet to be asked for one.

    but NOW I will know what to do when my turn comes!!!

    Reply
  3. Robert Henshaw says

    July 5, 2007 at 9:28 pm

    Good advice, Nathan. I’ve also heard (from other writers) it’s a good idea to ask the requesting agent to send back a quick email acknowledging the recent of the attached partial. But I’d like to hear it from an agent…would something like that bug you? It would seem borderline irritating – akin to having to sign for a partial or full when you get it via USPS.

    And, hey, I second luc’s request for guidance on the dreaded synopsis. My 2-page synopsis is arguably one of the worst things I’ve written. Do agents assume/care that the synopsis is going to be crappily written?

    Reply
  4. Nathan Bransford says

    July 5, 2007 at 9:30 pm

    I don’t mind if someone asks me to shoot back an e-mail letting them know it arrived, although I don’t think it’s usually necessary.

    And I’ve hesitated to post synopsis advice because everyone in publishing has a different idea of what a synopsis should be, but I’ll try and post on that soon.

    Reply
  5. green ray says

    July 5, 2007 at 9:47 pm

    I’ve been having an intense discussion with some friends about what contstitutes taking the high road versus the low road. And it inspired me to begin a new novel! So I’d like to enter the title in your contest, Nathan – a spiritual story of one man’s quest for truth:

    THE HIGH ROAD

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  6. voice of experience says

    July 6, 2007 at 2:19 am

    Robert, if you submit a partial to Nathan, there’s no need to ask for an email back acknowledging receipt. You’ll have an answer back from him on the submission itself long before you would even hope to get a simple acknowledgement of receipt from anyone else.

    Loving you for that, Nathan! If you treat your clients like you treat your supplicants (and how could you not?), you’re one awesome dude.

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  7. original bran fan says

    July 6, 2007 at 1:21 pm

    You mean the agent isn’t sitting in his office, waiting impatiently for the mail, wondering when that partial he requested from that brilliant query is coming in, doing nothing else until it arrives and reading it as soon as it does????

    All kidding aside, this makes perfect sense. When I meet someone for the second or third time, especially if some time has passed since I first met him/her, I re-introduce myself. I never assume that the person remembers my name. It is the same idea here. As much as we would wish for the above scenario, the more likely outcome is that it is now months later, the agent has looked at ten zillion pieces of paper (or electrons) in between your query and your partial. A reintroduction is a great idea.

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  8. Dwight's Writing Manifesto says

    July 6, 2007 at 2:24 pm

    Piling on this love-fest: Mr. Nathan, this is one of the most useful blog posts I can remember reading in all of litblogdom.

    I’ve always been insecure about the protocol for a partial. I wondered if I was supposed to take the opportunity to “talk up” my pages, or to just shut up and let them speak for themselves.

    You are a prince among men.

    Now get a haircut, hippy.

    Reply
  9. Heidi the Hick says

    July 6, 2007 at 3:36 pm

    Nooooo! No haircut.

    Reply
  10. Nathan Bransford says

    July 6, 2007 at 3:40 pm

    Actually — already got a haircut about a month ago. It’s shorter, but I would characterize it as “shaggy.”

    Reply
  11. Writer, Rejected says

    July 6, 2007 at 4:13 pm

    Crazy love-fest indeed.

    Reply
  12. writtenwyrdd says

    July 6, 2007 at 4:32 pm

    This and the reminder about formatting is great info. Thank you.

    However, have you read this post by copy editor Deanna Hoak?
    https://deannahoak.com/2007/07/03/budgets-and-manuscript-pages/

    Reply
  13. Other Lisa says

    July 8, 2007 at 10:19 pm

    De-lurking…

    Oops. I’m definitely guilty of this. Red-faced apologies.

    Re-lurking!

    Reply
  14. Wendy says

    January 9, 2009 at 6:00 pm

    Greeting Nathan,

    You gave some really great information here in your topic
    “How To Respond to a Request for a Partial”.

    I am wondering why someone would look for other agents. I would think they would want to find someone they work well with and have an understanding of one another.

    Do people really have several agents or is it just a writer hunting for other reasons?

    Reply
  15. I. M. Bitter says

    February 9, 2009 at 2:18 am

    Hey Wendy,

    If you’re checking back, … Nathan is speaking directly to authors who haven’t yet signed with an agent.

    1- You’re supposed to query widely and often until you sign a contract with an agent.

    2- Once you’ve signed with an agent, you’re exclusive, you stop querying, and hopefully the good understanding of each other you mentioned kicks in.

    -M

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  16. Patrick says

    September 18, 2009 at 10:33 pm

    Now that I've had a request for a partial, is it okay to continue shopping the project around? I had an agent request 100 pages (woo-hoo!), and I don't want to do anything impolite or unethical.

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  17. Priyantha says

    October 20, 2010 at 6:38 pm

    Hi Nathan, Thanks for the very useful advice. Your getting involved in "Maersk Alabama" story prompted me to contact you. I have a story which I shall submit to you observing formalities of e-query.

    Reply
  18. Pamela Jane says

    October 21, 2010 at 9:02 pm

    Thank you for the post about partials; it's very helpful. I thought I was all set with a polished memoir, well-written proposal and strong query letter, but recently I ws asked for a 5-page synopsis. The one thing I didn't think of! A root canal or, better yet, writing another memoir might be more relaxing. But, I'm buckling down manfully (or womanfully) to the job.

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  19. Johnny says

    April 28, 2011 at 10:15 pm

    Thank you, Nathan, for your post.

    I have a couple of questions:

    1. What is the best subject for the email so that it won't go to the spam folder? I'm thinking "Requested Material: Title"

    2. Should I include the cover page? I was thinking of including it, but the cover page has the word count, and I don't want the agent to think I didn't pay attention and sent him the full manuscript.

    3. So it's definitely ok to send as an attachment, right? It won't be blocked or go the spam folder?

    Thank you very much. I read most of your posts. I love your writing style.

    Reply
  20. Nathan Bransford says

    April 29, 2011 at 4:41 am

    Johnny-

    1. Here's a post on e-mail subject lines.
    2. Up to you.
    3. If they asked for it as an attachment, then yes.

    Reply
  21. Margaret Fisher says

    July 5, 2012 at 5:25 am

    Thank you for your informative (and funny! which is always a plus) articles. I'm currently in the long-suffering process of trying to get an agent, and like everyone else I've been dealt what seems like an endless sea of form rejections, and two requests for partials. One of those partials ended up becoming a request for a full, but the agent ultimately passed on the book (cry! lamentation!) On both ultimate rejections, I did, however, receive feedback suggesting that in my first chapter I told rather than showed too much. So taking that useful criticism, I've since added a prologue showing a great deal of what I'd previously only told via exposition in the first chapter, and was able to take said exposition out. My question is….since it's been months since those rejections, should I re-query those same two agents (and make sure to mention that I took their advice), or is it just a plain bad-form no no and I should keep trying other agents instead?

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  22. Nathan Bransford says

    July 5, 2012 at 6:30 pm

    Margaret-

    Hope this helps: https://nbrans.wpengine.com/2009/05/re-re-querying-redux.html

    Reply
  23. NM Johnson says

    March 28, 2014 at 12:49 am

    Hi Nathan,

    I received the following:

    Dear Ms. Johnson,

    It is with kind thanks that I respond to your submission. Please feel free to send the next three chapters or fifty pages of your manuscript for further consideration. You may do so by replying to this email with the requested materials attached as Word documents.

    I look forward to reading your work!

    My question:
    I originally sent the first 50 pages (word doc attachments which is what they asked for) as part of my submission (which is what they requested in their submission requirements along with a synopsis). Did they just miss this or are they requesting the next 50 pages? Do I respond and ask? Thanks so much for your help. Your blog rocks!

    Reply
  24. Nathan Bransford says

    March 28, 2014 at 12:51 am

    NM-

    Just respond and ask!

    Reply
  25. Katie Bennett says

    May 9, 2020 at 9:54 am

    Hi Nathan,
    If an agent asks for the first 30 pages in their submission guidelines, are they asking for what would be 30 pages in a book or for your first 30 A4 pages in your manuscript?
    Many thanks
    Katie

    Reply
    • Nathan Bransford says

      May 9, 2020 at 10:04 am

      The first 30 pages according to industry standard formatting: https://nbrans.wpengine.com/2007/02/how-to-format-your-manuscript

      Reply

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