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Let scenes unfold (page critique)

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If you’d like to nominate your own page or query for a public critique, kindly post them here in our discussion forums: If you’d like to test your editing chops, keep your eye on this area or this area! I’ll post the pages and queries a few days before a critique so you can see how your redline compares […]

Draw us in with vivid details (page critique)

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If you’d like to nominate your own page or query for a public critique, kindly post them here in our discussion forums: If you’d like to test your editing chops, keep your eye on this area or this area! I’ll post the pages and queries a few days before a critique so you can see how your redline compares […]

Give anticipation room to breathe (page critique)

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If you’d like to nominate your own page or query for a public critique, kindly post them here in our discussion forums: If you’d like to test your editing chops, keep your eye on this area or this area! I’ll post the pages and queries a few days before a critique so you can see how your redline compares […]

Every detail matters in an opening (page critique)

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If you’d like to nominate your own page or query for a public critique, kindly post them here in our discussion forums: If you’d like to test your editing chops, keep your eye on this area or this area! I’ll post the pages and queries a few days before a critique so you can see how your redline compares […]

Sharpen the details (page critique)

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If you’d like to nominate your own page or query for a public critique, kindly post them here in our discussion forums: If you’d like to test your editing chops, keep your eye on this area or this area! I’ll post the pages and queries a few days before a critique so you can see how your redline compares […]

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