What follows is some really basic and essential advice that will help you create characters that leap off the page. But I’m gonna start with the caveats on this post straightaway: don’t take this advice overly literally. I’m not saying you can’t name a universal emotion in a novel full stop. When I say “avoid,” […]
Characters
How to use hopes and dreams to make a character come alive
You probably already know that motivation is everything in a novel. Nearly everything worth reading flows from a character who wants something and actively goes after it. In writing advice land it’s popular to subdivide a character’s motivations into conscious motivations and unconscious motivations. Meaning, there’s something on the surface that’s motivating the character (saving […]
Shy characters don’t have to be passive
Every protagonist in a novel should start in one place and end up in another irrevocably changed. Character arcs are crucial building blocks of novels. One very common arc involves a character who starts off shy, timid, and/or aimless and has to become brave or find their voice and purpose. But here’s the problem that […]
Even minor characters need to want something
One of the core tenets of writing advice is that everything flows from a protagonist’s motivation. It’s what inspires journeys to Mordor, jaunts through strange chocolate factories, and maniacal voyages to exact revenge on a white whale. Characters need to want something. What’s often neglected: this applies to minor characters too! Every single character, all […]
Make characters interesting through contradiction
When you think of some of the most iconic characters in film and literature, there’s often an interesting contradiction at the heart of charater. James Bond is capable of heroic action stunts, but he’s sauve and debonair. Hannibal Lector eats people, but he can be charming and intelligent. Dolores Umbridge is a strict rule follower, […]
Why protagonists need to be active
I’ve been on a “story essentials” kick lately as I work my way through the latest round of revisions for my new novel. One of the big weaknesses in the last draft: my protagonist wasn’t active enough through the second act of the book. It is so crucial to keep a protagonist active throughout the […]