Critiques

Weave personality and a sense of atmosphere into your plot description (query critique)

January 13, 2022 by Nathan Bransford Leave a Comment

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Details bring a world to life (page critique)

January 6, 2022 by Nathan Bransford 1 Comment

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Vagueness kills a query (query critique)

December 9, 2021 by Nathan Bransford 2 Comments

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Don’t miss chances to establish the stakes (page critique)

December 2, 2021 by Nathan Bransford Leave a Comment

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Cliches are a missed opportunity to add voice (query critique)

November 18, 2021 by Nathan Bransford 3 Comments

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Don’t overstuff your sentences (page critique)

November 11, 2021 by Nathan Bransford 5 Comments

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