Thanks so much to everyone who attended Office Hours last Thursday!
In case you missed it, you can watch the video above (if you’re reading via the newsletter, please click here to see it). I forgot to hit record at the start of the call, so it kind of jumps right in (whoops).
Also check out: Here are the November office hours.
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Among the topics we covered:
- Integrating backstory and exposition
- Ageism in publishing
- Managing beta reader feedback
- Engaging readers through motivation
- The definition of “speculative fiction”
- Enhancing plot descriptions
- Structuring queries for multiple POVs
- How often do agents request synopses
- Crafting concise high-concept pitches
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Feedback welcome, particularly if there are any classes or events you’d like to see in the future.
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Loved office hours! Thanks for all the great advice.