Over the years I’ve done hundreds of query and first page critiques, and I have to be honest that I’m losing some steam on them.
Particularly with the query critiques, I feel like I’m running out of ways to say variations of “needs to be more specific!” and “losing sight of what is and isn’t on the page!”, which applies to about 80-90% of the queries. I could hunt for more interesting “problems,” but that brings its own challenges.
I’m going to put these critiques on hold for the time being. I realize these have consistently been one of the more popular category of posts over the years, but at the very least I think I need a break from them to refresh and see if I can find a way to bring a version of these critiques back in a way I feel excited about.
This does not apply to private critiques, and please still reach out to me if you need help with your query.
Your ideas and feedback welcome here! And thanks for understanding.
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I’ve enjoyed reading your critiques. I’ve learned a lot from you. So thank you for all the wise advise. Cheers
Your critiques have been a benefit to me as well. They have presented challenges to my writing that I continue working on.
My weakness is wordiness. To be specific and concise at the same time is…..
Thanks!
I admire the candor and courage needed to realize that a break is needed, especially from something that gains a lot of attention. It’s a good object lesson 🙂