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Guest Blogger: Jennifer Hubbard On Going From Blog Reader to (soon to be) Published Author

April 21, 2008 by Nathan Bransford 40 Comments

As promised, today we’re peeling back the curtain a bit to show what happens behind the scenes as a book goes from a query to a book deal. My client Jennifer Hubbard is the author of the young adult novel BLACK MOUNTAIN ROAD, which will be published late 2009/early 2010 by Viking. It’s her debut novel. She also has a wonderful blog on writing.

BLACK MOUNTAIN ROAD has an incredible plot: When popular teenager Julia Vernon dies in a car accident, no one knows why Colt Morrissey would care — they didn’t even say hello in the school hallways. But at the time of her death, Julia and Colt had been harboring an intense secret: they had been hooking up in fleeting moments, away from the view of their classmates, including Julia’s boyfriend.

A few days after the funeral, Colt discovers Julia’s diary, which is full of unsent letters that poetically describe how much she cared for him and wanted to be with him, but she didn’t have the courage to send them when she was alive. As he struggles to cope and move on, the letters keep pulling Colt back to their intense romance as simmering class issues ignite the town.

It’s just an amazing book, the writing is beautiful and moving, and Jennifer is a pro who has done her research about the publishing industry and is a pleasure to work with.

So how did it all happen?

Here’s Jennifer’s guest post:

When Nathan invited me to blog here, I thought you might want to know what a client’s side of the story is like. If you’ve been reading this blog, you know that he doesn’t discuss the details of his clients’ business, such as works in progress, deals in progress, etc. Published books just magically appear along the right margin of the blog! But I am willing to demystify the process a little.

Not that there’s so much mystery involved. I signed with Nathan not as a result of knowing any magic words or secret handshakes, not as a result of being related to him, and not as a result of cocktail-party schmoozing. (As if I’ve ever been to a cocktail party in my life.) If I knew any magic words, I would tell you. Or sell them at an entirely reasonable price.

I first found Nathan’s blog through a link. I wasn’t looking to add to my daily blog-reading at that point, but there was a lot of good information, so I marked it as a weekly read. But I quickly upgraded it to daily, because aside from all the practical information I found here, it was just plain fun to read. Even though I didn’t share Nathan’s infatuation with something called The Hills, I still got the jokes.

Which is not to say that it’s essential for a client and agent to have the same sense of humor. But it helps. In fact, nothing helps a person weather the publishing business like a sense of humor.

Aside from reading this blog (and particularly the posts listed in the right margin under “The Essentials: Please Read Before You Query,” such as “Anatomy of a Good Query Letter,” “How to Format Your Query Letter,” etc.), I did some other research: consulting reputable databases, reading online interviews (an amazing number of agent-interview transcripts are out there in cyberspace), and so forth. I read a couple of Nathan’s clients’ books, including one in the genre I was querying.

I worked on my query letter for about a week. At the last minute, I pared it down, cutting some subplot details out of my synopsis. I figured that when you’re writing to someone who receives hundreds of unsolicited emails every week, shorter is better. And if my main plot wasn’t good enough to pique interest, no subplot was going to do it.

My query letter went like this:
An introductory statement about what kind of project I had (YA novel).
A sentence or two about why I was querying Nathan, specifically. This part included a reference to the blog, and a reference to the clients’ books that I had read and liked.
A brief synopsis of my book (about 150 words, summarizing the secret relationship and the death around which my story revolves).
A sentence or two about my writing experience (I have had several literary short stories published; I named two of the journals).

This query yielded a request for a partial, which yielded a request for the full manuscript. When I got the request for the full, I pulled together a list of questions for prospective agents, which came in very handy when Nathan called that week.

I will say one thing about that call. Writers sometimes get letters that say, in essence, “You have talent, you have a good story here, but I don’t quite have that special connection with it…” Which can lead to a muttered, “Heck, if it’s good enough, why can’t they just take it anyway?” But the truth is that it’s better to have someone who’s excited about the manuscript. Only an enthusiastic editor or agent is going to do it justice. Nathan was excited about my book, and that call was worth waiting for.

He suggested some edits on the manuscript, and then shepherded my work into the hands of editors. While he did that, I worked on new projects. I managed to distract myself so thoroughly that when I got The Call, the Book Offer Call, Nathan may have thought he had just roused me from a coma. I suppose many authors shriek or jump up and down when they get The Call. I did not. I’m not much of a jumper and shrieker anyway; most game shows would never want me as a contestant.

Rather, I digested the news slowly, like the rich meal that it was.

Filed Under: The Writing Life Tagged With: clients, guest blog, Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, How to Find a Literary Agent

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Comments

  1. Josephine Damian says

    April 21, 2008 at 8:13 pm

    Welcome Jennifer!

    Questions: How long did it take between Agent Nathan’s call and the book deal call?

    Did Nathan’s edit suggestions involve more plot stuff or character stuff, or more along the lines of tighten-up-the-writing stuff?

    Reply
  2. liquidambar says

    April 21, 2008 at 8:38 pm

    Hi Josephine!

    The edits involved relatively minor plot and character issues. Probably a little more on character.

    –Jennifer H.

    Reply
  3. Sue Eves says

    April 21, 2008 at 8:38 pm

    Congratulations, Nathan and Jennifer. It sounds like a dream story all round!

    Nathan, just a thought – would reading full MS submissions on a Kindle work for you?

    Reply
  4. Michelle Moran says

    April 21, 2008 at 8:40 pm

    Great post, Jennifer! (Although I have to admit, I was one of those undignified shriekers!)

    I look forward to reading BLACK MOUNTAIN ROAD. Congratulations!

    Reply
  5. Nathan Bransford says

    April 21, 2008 at 8:42 pm

    Sue-

    I’d definitely like to move over to an e-reader, but so far I’m not such a fan of the idea of paying to upload my docs, which the Kindle makes you do, and the Sony Reader isn’t Mac compatible, and I use a Mac at home.

    I’m thinking I’m going to first see if I can read on an iPhone, and if not maybe I’ll wait on a next-generation e-reader before making an investment.

    Reply
  6. Josephine Damian says

    April 21, 2008 at 8:51 pm

    Jennifer, I made a bet with myserlf you’d say characters. More and more I’m realizing it’s all about the characters.

    Thanks!

    Reply
  7. r.c. says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:00 pm

    Congratulations and thanks for sharing your journey. My query was just like yours, minus the incredible plot and writing creds. Other than those two things, the similarity is uncanny. But seriously, I will be looking out for your book, it sounds wonderful.

    And I’m very upset with Steve Jobs for saying, “nobody reads anymore.” I really wish he’d get with the program because I can’t live without my Mac, but would love an e-reader.

    Reply
  8. Parker Haynes says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:13 pm

    Congratulations to you both. And a double shot of Crown Royal apiece.

    Jennifer,

    I went straight to your blog and I love it. You inspire me to give it a shot myself. Thanks.

    Although I don’t read YA, you’ve caught my attention. I’ll buy a copy when it comes out and read it before passing it on to my youngest grand-daughter.

    Reply
  9. tammi says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:31 pm

    Ooh.

    Nice behind-the-scenes skinny. 🙂

    Congratulations to you both!

    Reply
  10. Tom Burchfield says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:32 pm

    Congratulations, Jennifer. I follow these stories very closely and yours is an inspiring one.

    I’m still working on mine and continue to blog about it here: https://tbdeluxe.blogspot.com/

    Reply
  11. Heidi says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:33 pm

    Congratulations Jennifer! Thanks for giving an insight to your experiences. I am always excited to hear about new authors’ successes, especially those that start with the traditional query process.

    My question for Nathan: did you check Jennifer’s blog before you took her on as a client, and did her blog make a difference in how you viewed her as a writer? Or did you see her blog after she signed as your client?

    Reply
  12. J.P. Martin says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:33 pm

    Congratulations!

    I just have one question. I know the whole process can take a couple of years, but if there’s an agent that has already agreed to represent the book and a publisher that has already agreed to publish it, why is the book coming out two years from now?

    Reply
  13. Nathan Bransford says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:40 pm

    Heidi-

    No, I hadn’t seen Jennifer’s blog before I signed her on, but it definitely would have made a favorable impression — it’s a great blog. But I still would have taken her on even if she was blogless.

    j.p. martin-

    I hope to line up a guest blog in the next couple of months that goes into what’s happening in those two years more fully. Basically, the short version is: editing, copyediting, cover art, layout, pitching to sales team, sales team pitching to accounts, publicity, printing decisions, more publicity (hopefully), and then the book comes out. It takes a while for all that to happen.

    Reply
  14. Adaora A. says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:41 pm

    I’m probably a jumper. BLACK MOUNTAIN ROAD sounds really good.
    I have question for both Jennifer and Nathan.

    Jennifer (ladies first), how long did it take you to write your book and how many edits did you take before Nathan was reading over the dimly lit light of his mac computer? I always interested in time frame for writers.

    Nathan I just got an iPod nano(my first apple anything) and it made me wonder. Have you ever thought of starting a podcast? I know time is tight but it’d be cool if you could.

    P.S.: An iPhone would allow you to read emails AND let your favorite music filter through the background wouldn’t it? Then you could be in an ‘exceedingly’ good mood when you are reading queries.

    Reply
  15. Cam says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:46 pm

    What a great story. This is very helpful. Thanks for sharing, Jennifer. And congrats to you (and Nathan) on your new book.

    Reply
  16. Other Lisa says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:54 pm

    Jennifer, many congratulations! Looking forward to seeing your book cover on the side of the page!

    Reply
  17. liquidambar says

    April 21, 2008 at 9:57 pm

    Thanks for the congratulations and good wishes–and congrats to those of you who’ve mentioned your own success stories. As you all probably know, there’s still plenty of work on the road ahead of me!

    Adaora – I don’t remember how long it took to write, since I usually work on multiple projects at once. However, while I’m revising BMR for publication, that will be my top priority.

    –Jennifer H.

    Reply
  18. Jessica Burkhart says

    April 21, 2008 at 11:09 pm

    Interesting post, Jennifer! 🙂 Congratulations!

    Reply
  19. Sarah Garrigues says

    April 21, 2008 at 11:38 pm

    Congrats Jennifer and Nathan!

    Also, I must say that I am really enjoying your blog, Jennifer. It is both encouraging and insightful to see another writer’s journey. Thanks for sharing.

    Reply
  20. Adaora A. says

    April 21, 2008 at 11:48 pm

    @Jennier- I understand. I’m multiple at the minnute as well. I always ask every author that question anyways. Of course it has to come first! Thanks for the answer.

    Reply
  21. J.P. Martin says

    April 21, 2008 at 11:57 pm

    Nathan, thanks for answering my last question. I noticed that advance and royalty negotiations were not on the to-do list in the answer you gave. Is it customary for the advance to have already been paid at this point? Have the royalties already been agreed upon? I’m not sure if these questions fall under your “information you don’t speak of” policy, so I understand if you can’t answer them. But if you can then that would be awesome. Thanks.

    Reply
  22. Nathan Bransford says

    April 22, 2008 at 12:00 am

    J.P.-

    Figuring out payout and royalties, etc., goes into the offer and contract negotiation, which is all taken care of. So no, that’s not really a component in the year/two years time it takes for a book to come out. Contract signature is just the starting point.

    Reply
  23. Erica says

    April 22, 2008 at 1:30 am

    Oh! So you don’t have to share Nathan’s infatuation with The Hills? Phew.

    Reply
  24. A Paperback Writer says

    April 22, 2008 at 1:45 am

    Wow.
    I feel like I’ve just read a fairy tale.

    Reply
  25. mlh says

    April 22, 2008 at 3:23 am

    Congratulations on your success, Jennifer.

    Oh, I don’t know anything about the Hills either. I just nod my head and make noncommital grunts at the computer screen whenever Nathan prattles . . . ahem, I mean goes into great, wonderful, awe-inspiring discussion about it.

    Whew!

    Reply
  26. cactusbeetroot says

    April 22, 2008 at 3:57 am

    Congratulations, Jennifer!

    Reply
  27. Adaora A. says

    April 22, 2008 at 12:53 pm

    @Michelle- What I know of the Hills is the one episode I watched (which I admit I couldn’t stop watching until it was over), what I read here, and what a friend from work says.

    Reply
  28. mlh says

    April 22, 2008 at 1:13 pm

    @Adaora- Basically, this is my only source for The Hills. I never even heard about it until I started coming to this blog. And I hate just jumping into a show when it’s almost halfway over. I guess I’m going to have to rent the DVD set.

    Reply
  29. Lane says

    April 22, 2008 at 1:38 pm

    This was great, please do more posts like this

    Reply
  30. Ghost Girl says

    April 22, 2008 at 3:03 pm

    Congratulations Jennifer & Nathan! Thanks for sharing your journey with us and good luck with the rest of the process.

    (I saw your news on A2A also, Jennifer–wahoo!)

    Reply
  31. theartgirl says

    April 22, 2008 at 4:10 pm

    Hey Jenn,

    Great post. You work hard and deserve the best–plus you’re a genuinely nice person.

    Coll

    Reply
  32. Anonymous says

    April 22, 2008 at 6:38 pm

    Love your story Jennifer — especially the part about not being a squealer. They wouldn’t want me on game shows either 🙂

    Nathan — I see you’re taking appointments at RWA in San Fran this summer. I didn’t realize you were interested in adding romance to your list … is this so? I see you do like suspense — romantic suspense/adventure perhaps?

    Reply
  33. Anonymous says

    April 22, 2008 at 6:41 pm

    << I don't rep genre romance (but I do rep women's fiction and memoir), >>

    Ah … I found my answer 🙂

    Reply
  34. Lynne says

    April 22, 2008 at 7:45 pm

    Congrats, Jen! Sounds like a great book. BTW, Nathan, I see a lot of books listed on your blog as good reads but a lot of them are *old* books. Older than you. So, which books have *you* represented? Inquiring minds.

    Reply
  35. Nathan Bransford says

    April 22, 2008 at 7:51 pm

    Lynne-

    The older ones are books where I sold reprint rights for a new edition. In addition to living authors I also represent literary estates and have sold reprint rights for authors like Lawrence Durrell, Gerald Durrell, Richard Powell, and Winston Churchill, all of whom Curtis Brown Ltd. represented while they were alive.

    Reply
  36. Kristina Springer says

    April 22, 2008 at 10:57 pm

    Congrats again Jennifer (and Nathan)!! Your story is great and you must be a fantastic writer that Nathan took you on even though you don’t like the Hills (REALLY?!). 🙂 Can’t wait to read your book!!

    Kristina

    Reply
  37. Lynne says

    April 23, 2008 at 1:47 am

    Nathan,
    Thanks! Now I know!

    Reply
  38. Irene Tsai says

    April 23, 2008 at 2:36 am

    Congratulations!!!!
    Irene

    Reply
  39. Indu Nair says

    April 23, 2008 at 1:57 pm

    Jennifer,

    Congratulations and Thank you for sharing your success story. Truly inspiring.

    I look forward to reading BLACK MOUNTAIN ROAD.

    Best Wishes.

    Reply
  40. Betty Atkins Dominguez says

    April 23, 2008 at 10:08 pm

    Great Post Jennifer. Thank you for taking the time to tell us all of this and for answering our questions.

    I’m afraid I wouldn’t jump up and down and yell either. How could I? I’d be lying on the floor, in faint.

    Reply

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